
Ron and Harry sat at the table for breakfast.
When Harry and Ron got off the table, Ron was holding a large broom.
Harry and Ron ran away as fast as fast as fast as fast.
Harry and Ron were scared.
When Harry Potter and Ron were happy Professor McGonagall was waiting.
The (can't figure it out) part of Hogwart's was close.
Suddenly a huge dragon came.
But as Harry and Ron were close,
Ron had a large broom.
The End.
He's obviously missing a few details in the plot, but all in all it wasn't a bad story. I quite liked the title, although I'm pretty sure he doesn't actually know what the word "justice" means. It's fun to watch him learn and see words come alive for him. Next week he starts the first grade reading level. We can't wait!
When Harry and Ron got off the table, Ron was holding a large broom.
Harry and Ron ran away as fast as fast as fast as fast.
Harry and Ron were scared.
When Harry Potter and Ron were happy Professor McGonagall was waiting.
The (can't figure it out) part of Hogwart's was close.
Suddenly a huge dragon came.But as Harry and Ron were close,
Ron had a large broom.
The End.
He's obviously missing a few details in the plot, but all in all it wasn't a bad story. I quite liked the title, although I'm pretty sure he doesn't actually know what the word "justice" means. It's fun to watch him learn and see words come alive for him. Next week he starts the first grade reading level. We can't wait!

4 comments:
That brought a smile to my face. Sure do love you Coley Boy.
Wow, he is a creative little guy! I can't even imagine getting to the point of having kids that read and write! So quickly it happens!!
That is Awesome! I can't wait to hear more of his book. I would like to know what Ron is planning on doing with the broom :)
nice, very nice. He is sure a smarty pants! I hope you can all keep up with him :)
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